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Empty Hands

Missing image



Tingling with the memory of a touch,
A touch that felt warm with love.

Love that fills the heart with desire,
Desire that's left the hands empty.

Empty with only a tingling memory,
A memory of the touch of love.


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  • Blue Rew silver member
    June 2, 2007

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    Again, so much expressed in these few lines...
    taking the reader to places of the heart & mind.
    Your style creates a rhythm and flow that leaves
    an impression of what is left unspoken. Blue