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The end has come and I sit alone
As i have the past two years
It's differetn now, you said goodbye
And I count my lonley tears.

The tears I cry, not to be sad
Only a slight hint of relief
For you're the one that let us go,
Released me from my grief.

I am not afraid to be aloone,
You taught me that with ease
Just do not ask to take you back
This, i ask you please.

I need to live for me right now
And to make a brand new start
There is someone else for me out there
I'm glad our ways did part.

This was written for an ex boyfriend and
I just recently found it.  Dated Febuary 7, 2003

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  • kaitlyn-love
    May 23, 2007
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    Very good.

    I like it, a different aproach to a break up. Awsome.
    -Kaitlyn-


  • broken-colours
    May 23, 2007

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    I suggest you title this "Nevermore", for the love that you never wish to return to. Very brilliant concept; actually wishing to split-up with someone. I liked it.