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Love stories

Love is [supposed]
to be about warmth,
glitter & candy.

[Not alcohol induced
comas
and drugs you couldn't
name]


Play by the rules my darling,
don't put up a fight.
When will you see
that you're

B R O K E N ?


& if like little stars
you could shine your way
& collect the little pieces,
of your lost faith,
then maybe I would

[Give myself to you)



Live by the knife,
die by it too,
surly you can see.


[Baby this isn't the way
this *wont* keep you real]




Don't leave me don't,
              close your [eyes]

Author notes

Romeo & Juliette =] 'keep [b.r.e.a.t.h.i.n.g] just for [x.me.x]'

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  • butterfly-ona-wheel
    November 7, 2008
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    :)

    woah i really love that one. fave


  • xxRainbowDawnxx
    August 17, 2007
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    Love is meant to be many things but unfortunately we are left down plenty of the time [or at least I seem to be, or have done in the past]. It is really never fair in love and war and I have plenty of proof of that to give the Gods or whoever created love. Nicely penned and expressed.


  • Nuclear
    May 31, 2007

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    This is a nice write, but I can't see any Shakespeare in it; other than the mentioning of a knife. Oh well...

    I see you are a finalist in this contest, so good luck.


  • over the rainbow--x
    May 24, 2007

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    'Play by the rules my darling,
    don't put up a fight.
    When will you see
    that you're

    B R O K E N ?'
    love those lines^^^^^ love this poem, great great write =]=] good luck in my contest!! =] ♥


  • oh willoughby
    May 23, 2007

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    "& if like little stars
    you could shine your way
    & collect the little pieces,
    of your lost faith,
    then maybe I would

    [Give myself to you)"


    cool!
    i submitted in that contest too!
    oh!
    and since i entered your contest
    enter mine!


    • CianLOVES
      May 23, 2007
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      Lol I know I got this contest from reading your poem =] x & I will I promise just not tonight... cse its 11.40pm


      • oh willoughby
        May 23, 2007
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        tis okay

        i wont be able to sumbit
        the piercing poem till tomorrow
        or later tonight


  • broken-colours
    May 23, 2007

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    Simply incredible. Didn't realize it was about Romeo and Juliet until I saw your author's notes, but it makes sense. Best of luck to you in the contest.

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