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"Old Sammy Sot"

Old Sammy Sot, stuck her finger in her Pot.
Just to see if it was hot.
She found the Pot was realy Hot.
But now one less finger the Sot has Got.

She thought now what shall I do?
I just cant eat Hot Finger Stew.
Then Her Brain She began to rack.
When she saw in the wall a big wide crack.
She jumped right in with a great big Sigh.
She jumped so high She landed in the Sky.

Oho Me oho Me, oho My cried Old Sammy Sot.
Just look at me and the mess

I got.
Got no hot Pot got no wide crack.
Laying here on a white Cloud flat on My back.

Soon the Cloud began to break Old Sot began to slip.
Down Down She came falling on an Old Ship.
The Ship was so rotten She busted the Hull.
She woke up with a knot on her Skull.

There She sit Old Sammy Sot.
She didn't even know just what was what.
She saw no Ship no Cloud or blue Sky.
She saw no wide crack that even looked very high.

But there she sit Old Sammy Sot.
All alone with her finger in her hot black pot.

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  • no more name
    September 30
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    This is a very well written poem with great imagery. Thank you for entering the contest.

  • I loved this! I couldn't stop laughing as I read this. You have a talent for writing poetry; you could go far. Great emotions and amazing imagery here. BRAVO! WOW! keep up the good work! thanks for entering and good luck in my contest!


  • grampabob1946 silver member
    August 23

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    Sir, you have a gift!

    What a wonderful write! I'm impressed. This is a great one for the pubs in Ireland. You know it rains every day, a fine mist which permiates your clothing. So in the pubs they have 13.5 % beer and a roaring fire. If you could tell this one from memory you would be a great hit! Sir, I salute you!!!

  • lol loved this! it was amazing! WOW! this was really really good! keep up the good work! thanks for entering and good luck in my contest!

  • haha

    funnyz

  • lol i loved this piece! the rhythm was neat as well. this whole piece was awesome! WOW! keep up the good work! thanks for entering and good luck in my contest!

  • poets whisper silver member
    January 26
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    thank you


  • Riamh
    November 17, 2008
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    Thank you, I enjoyed the read


  • BehindTheShadow
    November 15, 2008
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    ...


  • Slick99
    September 13, 2008
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    very cute ... thanks so much for entering, and good luck!!! -slick99


  • daviscth silver member
    September 4, 2008
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    I remember reading this before. Thanks for giving me the chance to enjoy it again.


  • Meroza
    August 30, 2008
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    This write is perfect, so dramatic and fun! Tihi, you did a fine job!

    Thanks for entering


  • Nostalgic Moon
    August 26, 2008

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    haha this is so creative! it made me feel like i was reading a children's story
    ^_^
    haha wonderful,
    besto of luck!


  • Fire-Fly
    June 27, 2008

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    A crazy one but it definitely works. Thanks for entering it.

    Well done and good luck in my contest.


  • Thom Boulton
    May 31, 2008

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    This was an excellent nonsense poem.
    However it did not make me laugh out loud.
    Thank you for entering


  • Erozay
    May 8, 2008
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    its wierd but i like it

  • daviscth silver member
    April 13, 2008

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    I really enjoyed reading this humorous poem. I think you did a great job with it. Thanks for posting in my contest.


  • FloridaGatorQueen silver member
    February 28, 2008

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    LMBO This is way too funny. I couldn't help but laugh. Enjoyed the read!!! Thank you for entering my contest.


  • RedwingSpirit silver member
    November 5, 2007
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    Ouch that pot sure was hot. Excellent Poem


  • Travis7
    June 15, 2007

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    this poem is really funny
    thanks for entering my contest
    your an awesome poet i love it
    your awesome
    GOOD JOB
    YOUR AWESOME


  • JeannieD Hunter gold member
    June 11, 2007

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    LOL sounds like one of my days. Heehee. This is cute and funny. Thank you for entering and good luck.

    Jeannie


  • xXxbecca10o8o7xXx
    June 2, 2007
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    hah this was funny nicely written thanx for your entry!

  • goalsv
    May 24, 2007
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    HAHAHAHAHAHAHA! THIS WAS SO FUNNY! I got a real kick out of reading it. Great job!

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