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I Can't Take This!

I can't take this,
I'm going insane.
My heart's being ripped to shreds!
My love for you is slowly being slain!


"Save me, save me!
No, wait, don't!
I can't take this!
Let it go, you won't!
Stop loving me!
It'd make this easy!
It'd make me less ambivalent.
And my stomach less queasy."



I don't want your drama,
But it seems to stay by me.
Like venom and a snake,
A bee's nest on a tree.
Shake it up, piss it off.
I'll be the one bitten and stung.
With one last gasping breath of air,
I'll have sung:

"Save me, save me!
No, wait, don't!
I can't take this!
Let it go, you won't!
Stop loving me!
It'd make this easy!
It'd make me less ambivalent.
And my stomach less queasy."


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Comment appreciated. This is one of my favorites that I have written in a while. What do you think?

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  • adema1214
    May 24, 2007
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    whoa....like whoa!