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It's Cold Outside

Darling, it's cold outside
Please let me in here
Hold me close, against your heart
And chase away my fear.

Darling, don't let go
Keep me warm forever
Always near, never far
Safe from the stormy weather.

Darling, you are here
You'll never leave me again
You are my blanket, my dear
And you're my closest friend.

Author notes

To John: baby, i luv u with all my heart. i never thought i would be able 2 write another luv poem but u changed that around.

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  • NickelleteXninja
    June 1, 2007

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    short and sweet, but to much like christmas for my taste...

    Love is a grand thing. Just make sure your right


  • joelegy
    May 30, 2007
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    Love it... short and sweet


  • Red Rose of Light
    May 30, 2007
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    this is so sweet I hope it works out with you 2


  • XxStIlLhErExX
    May 30, 2007

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    this is an amazing poem...
    the wway that you put yourr words...
    it says alot more than what you think..
    this is a great poem...
    keep up the good work...
    Caycee♥


  • nessundorma
    May 23, 2007
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    Beautiful, i simply love it!

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