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Distracted

Distractions are everywhere.
My brain is fixed on you.
I really don't wanna share.
But I will because you do too.

You're the only thing on my mind.
I want you so bad.
To me you were always kind.
This is so sad.

I can see in your eyes,
How much you care.
Looks tell no lies,
So I'll be there.

Please tell me what you think

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  • explosivefrog
    July 12, 2007
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    hope this is about me babe good


  • Shirley Shaw
    July 6, 2007
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    Excellent Poem,Indeed

    Hello Tiffany;(sarcastic alice);
    This is a very good poem, and one so true, indeed! I know Just How U feel!I Especially 'Love The Part' About "Distractions Are Everywhere") Now That Is 'The-Trueth', Indeed....Great Write...'God Bless You'.....Love, Shirley ann shaw-raytown,mo.....