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high tide

high tide
buried in sand
a clam

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  • Kappa Pyua
    September 3, 2008

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    this is very good. I'm only unsure of one thing. Would this one be considered a pivoting haiku with the middle line, or is there a pause? Thanks for sharing. UNT


  • queen Moderators member
    May 23, 2007
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    I like this a lot