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Taste Testing

I keep my eyes closed
to savor your sweet taste
If I could I'd hold you
and never let this moment pass.
But I can't
so I'll savor every taste
until the next

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had to write it down before it washed off my hand

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  • Riot Girl
    May 23, 2007
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    it's pretty cool.....