Many times things are forgotten
Maybe its the world we live in
We struggle each and everyday
Just to find some point of refuge
Some people are blessed and lucky
Some people can't catch a break
In a disposable world its easy
to be discared and left alone
This world is scary and cruel
What was once easy is now hard
Just to make an existance daily
tears the heart and soul away
So when you see someone lost
living on bare necessities
Show some compassion and love
There's no worse feeling...being left alone
A contest entry
- ~ Picture Inspired contest~ Homeless by Frozentearz.
300 points, ended June 3, 2007, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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There is no worse feeling than being alone! You are so right about that! Show some compassion and love! This is a wonderful entry! Thanks for sharing and best wishes in the contest!
Frogz~ -
I think you have nailed it there is no worse feeling than being left alone, your poem speaks of the trials of many of our world today,
Thank you for sharing, warm thoughts your way.
Frozentearz -
VERY GOOD
I really like the last few lines:So when you see someone lost living on bare necessities Show some compassion and love There's no worse feeling...being left alone~Thank you so much for sharing
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very good
especially like the second stanza
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