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what we couldn't see

He said he loved me
but now I really see
It was him who hurt me
but how could that be

He said it was a dumb mistake
but I realize what he says is fake
He says that I should stay
that he would change his ways

I know what he says is a lie
but it's so hard to tell him goodbye
I thought he loved me but now I know
he'd just as well throw me out in the cold

All his lies 
they made me cry
I admit that I had thoughts
but they were all his fault

I knew it would happen 
that he would cheat
but now all I have to do is leave
Leave him like he left me
at the time I was in the most need

Now all these thoughts that run in my head
but I haven't missed him yet
I'm glad he's gone
so I can sing my songs
songs about freedom and how I don't need him

He said he loved me
but how could that be
the truth lies within
something he couldn't see

Please tell me what you think

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  • StarCrossedOut
    May 30, 2007
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    omg

    i nvr new you were such a poet!!!


  • XxBROKEN-ANGELxX
    May 23, 2007

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    OTS OK THANX FOR YOUR COMMENT =]
    I SOO LOVE THIS POEM
    JUST THE WAY IT FLOWS =] IM GOING TO CHECK OUT SOME OF YOUR OTHER POEMS =]

  • XxBROKEN-ANGELxX
    May 23, 2007
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    aw

    thats really emotional
    really goodd flow to it
    =]