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Break up Poem

Hey you guys...I been goin’ through some tough times with my girlfriend so I wrote these rhyme-poetries. All my friends said it was really gooood- they said I should read it and expose my bleeding wretched life Its called…Da B.U.P.



The knowledge is quite damning to the best of em,’ PLATO,
You said burned aloud,
Plato had better suit armour for your grim shenanigans
I laugh like great puppetry needs me

But as a setting star is born of falling
If it could have mustered more malaise to catch up with relished law
But before you could whip out your shriveled cell phone like it’s a foot long hotdog
Its-gone-so-soon-so-sing lay down go back to sleep only safe only safe
To dance, that of a fire bound peacock ripper
I shred a cock aloud
And fire rips into your dream,
In a lull you scream I have the wolf-skin blanket
I call to what you sing; we sleep into the pusher’s resort
Blanket time awakens; you push your praise in an envelope, palm Sunday a little harder
Was it love in a letter hand was it tear gas meadows underfoot?
Delve into the tortured chambers of the heart
Alive in the pusher’s resort you know it’s funny where they always leave the keys
Palm Sunday hard deep and give 
Why salvation plants you by your feet
And harder yet your chambers
Its law you know feeble and cracked
Welcome back, but you best bring the locksmith the next time you come ‘round

Author notes

Boom chicka boom wah wut wah
oh woe is my broken soooooouuuuuullllll!!!

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Please tell me its gonna be all write, czech it

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  • Averse Enabler
    May 23, 2007
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    As I write this a metronome beat still plays in my head what a rythm and subtle nonetheless
    Your Short Story that I read was very funny but this is more satisfyingly funny, I just hope people get it
    This is my fav. for the contest although I will enter it (reluctantly) I still need a bronze.
    And it aint gonna be all write you cynical bastard, wow