The negativity of meaningless emotions
Consuming time of possible motion
Desire for that unattainable
And yet desire to not desire
Seeming contradictions
Pain self-inflicted
Desire for motion
And desire yet unspoken
Please tell me what you think
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There are a lot of ways to hurt yourself Jimmy, saying that you're never going to cut yourself is not the same as saying that you're never going to experience "pain self inflicted".
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very true, but I never plan to experience self inflicted physical pain.
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A good write jimmy, but I'm a little concerned about the line "pain self inflicted" and what it refers to. I mean I know you're emo but you're not that bad are you?
I like that the first stanza and the last rhyme, really closes it off nicely. God I miss everyone, including you.
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I miss people too and "pain self inlflicted" is more emotional in that the more I think about it the more it hurts, I've said I would never cut and thats something I plan to stick by. But the concer is always nice shows that people care *hugs*.
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