Do you think about tomorrow?
What jobs you have to do.
I say forget about tomorrow
Give work an I.O.U.
For just one day say goodbye
Go live your life your way
The structure to your day, bye bye
Enjoy this present-day
Forget about tomorrow
Cancel it from your mind
Forget about your obligations
Take a day, remember who you are.
Please tell me what you think
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This poem is fantastic. It really invites you to join in. It lets you think about what you would do if life was that simple, if you could use an I.O.U for everythign. Fantastic metaphor too
Well done! Great Poem!
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"Do you think about tomorrow?
What jobs you have to do.
I say forget about tomorrow
Give work an I.O.U."
i love how short and simple this is, but yet you used words that rhyme that you normally dont see day to day.
also they poem i 100% agree with, its kindof like how someone comeing out af a hard to conqure disease looks on life...very nice write
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EXCELLENT!!!!!
I so wish I could everything you said in your poem especially "Give work an I.O.U" that has to be my favorite part. -
That sounds like so much fun!....too bad it might get me fired- or at least written up or whatever. (It's like an employee blacklist. Too many times and you're gone.) Man...don't put ideas into my head...
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Nice. Simple write, but it's something that needs to be reminded to people. Nicely done
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