Where do I begin?
Please tell me
Where do I begin?
I know in my heart that I love you
I know im my heart that I cant have you
I know in my heart that I will have to wait
But where do I begin?
Please tell me
Where do I begin?
I want to tell you how I feel
To make it real to you how I feel
I want you to love me with all your heart
But where do I begin?
Please tell me
Where do I begin?
Do I just walk in and say it straight?
Do I walk in and tell you I feel the opposite of hate?
Will you accept that the way i wish you would?
Oh where do I begin?
Please tell me
Where do I begin?
I want to get to know you better
I want to learn to love you more
I want to have you love me back
But where do I begin?
... and when?
Author notes
love... drives even the sane crazy...
A contest entry
- ~These Are My Confessions~ by xxRainbowDawnxx.
450 points, ended June 29, 2007, 12 entries
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This was sweet.... Simply wrote but yet a complex and hard to deal with emotion. I like the way you repeated about where do I start as that is a good point, where do we start when we don't even know where we should finish or what direction we are going in the first place? Nice sweet write with a lotta love and truth in it.
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damn i missed alot i guess u have to fill me in this is crazy. i love it!!!
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lol yep lots been happening... luckily, all worked out well with the topic of this poem
thanks for the comment and applause
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Awe, Allie, this is so sweet...sad and sweet at the same time cause i can really feel your distress. I hope things work out for you in the best whether you tell him or not. Stray strong to God though!
Michelle
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hey
thanks for having a look at this. thanks for the 'best wishes' too... love is hard. lol
i gotta run, but i'll try to look at some of your stuff as soon as i get time.
xoxo
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to quote Buffy... luv makes you do the wacky...
I agree...
This poem was great... i really liked it nd Think you should keep up the good work...
Luv MDH xoxo
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he he yep. thanks for the comment and applause i'll try to read a few more of yours when i get a chance... pfft or rather, if the skool lets me.
xoxo Ampd
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