she vows to honour
she vows to obey
she vows to love
she vows to live for You
He vows to punish her if she is bad
He vows to push her limits to please Himself
He vows to give her ample pain
He vows to live for her
A perfect union of two souls drifting through life
Searching, forever searching for each other
Completion reached at last
When one soul is absorbed into the other
Owning another entirely
Caring for another selfishly
Wanting more than everything
Showing more love than ever before
He completes her
she enriches Him
Master and slave
Together hearts are bound in chains
In a list
A contest entry
- vows by patsoldcat.
700 points, ended May 26, 2007, 8 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
A glimpse into how i feel about my Master
Comments
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*Standing Ovation*
Perfect.
Nothing else needs to be said... simply perfect.
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It Rocks
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Thank you chester420 for your short comment and the wonderful applause
It means so much to me when people appreciate my poetry - thank you again
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wow
definatly not ordinary vows
but it is so nice to see commitment in all relationships
nice work
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this is just incredible... i love the way you spell things out for the world to se that it is such a loving relationship... i think when peple even come close to what you have then they are very lucky... your love is a complete thing and nothing halfhearted...
i wish you all the best in the contest
cheers
Jen
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Thank you Jen for your wonderful comments and the applause
It is true - Master and i share something that is more profound than any words could possibly explain
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thank you
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thank you
blessings and luck -
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my pleasure
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Thank you very much My pet for writing this and posting it here.
I agree that vows should not be taken lightly and I look forward to our years together living these vows.
YLM
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You are everything to me Master and i bow in awe to You,
Forever in Your service,
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Interesting write!Very nice.
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Thank you snow queen
As far as I am concerned vows are not to be taken lightly and they should come from the heart - ergo, this is dedicated to my Master
Thank you for the comment and the applause - much appreciated!
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