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Here I Am

I'd love to say,
that I don't compulsively check AIM to see if you're on
that I don't think of you twenty plus times a day
that I don't wish you weren't leaving for Europe for three weeks
that I don't wish you weren't so busy that you can't spend five minutes with me
that I don't replay that thirty second phone conversation over and over in my head
that I don't listen to that song nine times a day, just because you sent it to me
that I don't read what you wrote in my year book at least twice a day
that I don't look at your Myspace pictures constantly
that I don't write sappy poems about how I feel about you
that I could forget about you for a while

but I can't, so here I am

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yay for anaphora! (damn AP english)

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  • Mysterious chick
    June 5, 2007

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    wow this is good i guess i can realite to it in someway well i cheked ur poem cuz of the msg that u was asking for points so yea good work keep it up!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


    • pointlessdayz
      June 6, 2007
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      hey, thanks for reading my work! If you have anything you need some comments on, let me know!

      -alex