I hear the rain,
The sound of my tears,
The tears I cry every night,
Every night with pain,
The pain that kills in the end,
I want to run away,
So far away,
Away from every one,
And every thing that people say to me,
I don’t want to listen,
No more I want to hear a best friends fear,
I wish to lay and cry,
I sit,
For no more I can I run,
If I keep running,
Ill fall,
Fall down so hard,
To what no one will save me,
So I fall and I sit and cry,
For I cry with the rain,
I scream with the storm,
The storm that is raining in and out side of my head,
I scream so loud,
To what I’m the only one there,
And still no one listen apart from you,
The love and shelter,
You support me in many ways,
Yet I go back to my many ways,
For only for me to say;
“Love can’t hold me for ever”
A contest entry
- Have You Ever Dreamed of Having Powers? by Lady Altheia.
600 points, ended July 19, 2007, 3 entries
Bronze trophy winner
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Holy sh. . .
that was amazing!!!
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oh thanks
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oh wow i love it lol very good ur a very nive writer wayyyy better than me
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I want to run away,
So far away,
Away from every one,
And every thing that people say to me,
I don’t want to listen,
No more I want to hear a best friends fear,
I wish to lay and cry,
that was so sad... but I still enjoyed this poem very much, wonderful job! Congrats on the bronze
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i wouldnt know wat to do with you u no that it comments like this that gets me going
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aww this is sad but very good. Thank you for entering, and good luck. This is a great and wonderful piece. I am so glad you shared it with me.
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im happy to share any thing wit any one
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really good
wow thats really good writting good work I like it
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