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A Chance to Prove Myself

My world is going in a
    d
      o
        w
        n
      w
      a
    r
  d
    s
      p
        i
        r
      a
    l
Life was good until I
      -shrunk-
I was meant to be killed
        X X
          _
They hit me in the back of my
          /    *  H  *
        / * e          a *
      /        *  d  *
And forced a pill
        d
        o
        w
        n
          my throat

No one will believe me
        o\/o
          __
Now that I'm just a kid
            O
          / ! \
          (  )
          '  '
Give me a chance!  I'll prove my
        $-worth-$
I'll become the greatest
        de
    t        e
        ct
        i
        v
        e
              ever!                     

Author notes

This, if you haven't guessed it, is Cased Closed. Conan wishes to get back to his normal size and age so people will believe what he sees and hears. As a kid, he has to work through Rachel's detective dad, who isn't much of a detetive any more. (Luckily he's supid and egotistic enough to believe he solved the crime when Conan did all the work and gave him the answers.) ^_^ I like this comic! (It is also hard for me to read anime/manga because my father outlaws it, so I read it whenever I get the chance. If you know of any place to read on-line, that would be super!)

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