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Release

Lost in oblivion
Careening into the ever-tightening walls of my existence
Despair holds my heart
Can you hear it beating in the midst of all this tyranny?
It's squeezed tighter in a vice-like grip

Until all fades to black

My eyes open; the sun is shining
A brilliant yellow orb of glowing warmth
Relief washes over me
Releasing me from my dispassionate misgivings
Basking me in the warmth of loving light

And on this sunny day
I am finally warm
No longer chilled by darkness
No longer hindered by fears
For I am one with the light

Author notes

Chaos and darkness overcome by the light...

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  • Pisces Pieces
    June 5, 2007

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    It's so warm and hopeful, there are words of strength and courage in the face of the chaos and darkness, your words are calm and have a peace among them.
    Thank you for entering.