Tell Him
Tell him my body is alive
But my heart and soul have died
Tell him I cannot live
Without him by my side
Tell him he is my life mate
Tell him it's not too late
Tell him he should be mine
Tell him he still has time
Tell him I need him here
Tell him he has nothing to fear
Tell him I now am free
Tell him it was meant to be
Tell Him
Tell him my body is alive
But because of what I've done
My heart and soul have died
Author notes
this poem is about a dream i had.
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That was awesome. So deep yet so simple. Every word is weighted in gold.
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that must of been a odd dream i am not sure if it was good or bad dream
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nice poem you seem to of got the writers block taken care of well keep writing
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Ethereal and weird, yet very pretty. Thumps up!
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Simple, short and deep. My best style, excellent work. and good dream. lol
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thanks for the applause. I was dreaming about my significant other dying and this poem was directed toward my soul mate. Him and I didn't work out for nine years and he'll always have a part of my heart.
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awwww... this is sad but it is amzing at the same time. good write
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I loved it!!! Great write!!!
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