Silence was my sickness,
my terminal condition,
Playing games with my reality
and chords to shape my vision.
My silence was suspending
was my own
and with a whimper,
I saw my world end in mute.
Speaking volumes of existance
In a stifled, fading voice...
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A contest entry
- Silence by -ButterflyCuts-.
300 points, ended June 6, 2007, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - BLOW MY MIND UP by Swan song.
1000 points, ended August 26, 2007, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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My silence was suspending
was my own and with a whimper,
I saw my world end in mute.
to die in silence
right now sounds great to me -
I like this it is well written and croons along. This poem found a sweet spot in my heart. Very good
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Your words come so powerful and so deep to me. I love this beautiful write and i loved the flow and the damn damn good imagery which is very nice. I appreciate u for this one, beautiful written piece from u. thanks for sharing this piece of work with everyone. hope to read more of yours
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Deafening!
A very powerful and explosive write
that speaks volumes in the purity of silence.
An intriguing poem that captures the audiences
attention extremely well. Well done!
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