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Lost

As she sits in the room alone
She finds herself thinking
About everything that has happened
Over the years

She thought she was over it
That she had escaped the darkness
And was finally free
But she thought wrong

Memories came flooding back
Like a tidal wave crashing down
Destroying everything in its path
Memories she thought were long gone
Come to haunt her again

In her eyes she sees the world
As an evil place
Where everyone hates her
And doesn't care

She sees her life
Going nowhere but down
Into nothing
Into darkness
Into hell

But she doesn't want this life anymore
She doesn't want to feel lost again
She wants to find that open door
That leads to a place
Where everything is just right

She wants to be able to feel happy
Not weighed down by this depression
She wants to to what it is like
To feel like that again

Lost inside herself
Waiting to be found
How can she get out?

Or is she bound to this terrible fate
Bound to live her life in worry
And defeat
Or can she get out
Of this darkness
That has kept her waiting
All these years

When will all the feelings of despair
And the feeling that there is no hope
Finally let go
And free her from this dark
Empty hole

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  • angelsslayer
    June 26, 2007
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    Strong poem. The words hit you really hard, Well written, Great write,
  • live.fun.love.smile
    May 25, 2007
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    awesome

    amber wow this is wow great job and as leann has said i am here for you if you wanna talk i love the line

    She sees her life
    Going nowhere but down
    Into nothing
    Into darkness
    Into hell
    that is really deep oh and let out your emotions because they make beautifully deep poetry


  • alwaysnforeveryours
    May 23, 2007

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    wow

    amber this poem is really deep. i really hope you know that im [always] here if you want to talk.
    --LEANN--
  • perfec angel
    May 23, 2007
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    wow

    amber this is deep i realy am sorry for the way you are feelirng and i hope that you can get help for it are you going back into the deep depression please tell me you know you can trust me and just so you know i am always here if you need to talk

    `ashley~