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Hey [I See You Looking At Me]

Hey
I see you looking at me
You got something to say?
Is there something to see?

You think I'm a freak.
And you're probably right
I'm the dark emo girl
Crying through the night

Hey
I see you staring at me
I know I'm different
I am who I want to be

You think I'm strange
Well, I think it's true
And hey
You see me looking right back at you

Hey
I see you turning away
And I know [I know]
You have something to say

You need to say something
I see it in your eyes
The truth is so hidden
Behind all the lies

But hey
I see you needing me
And yeah
There is something to see

You [You need me]
I [I'm here for you]
Yeah [I know]
What is true

Hey
Why'd you turn away?
Hey
I had something to say.

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  • otakuchick89
    May 29, 2007

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    LUV IT!!

    I LUV it!! But there's a typo!!

    Thr truth is so hidden

    I'm guessing that it's supposed to be "the" LOL!!
    it happens!! just thought I'd let you know!!
    Other than that I LUV IT!! KEEP IT UP!!


  • - Injected Fear -
    May 28, 2007

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    Awesome =)

    Woo, this song is so catchy It seems like it'd be a very electrifying song.. You should make it =P Yes, it was me looking at you through the milk carton... Mhmm.. I love you!


  • Infinite-Remedy
    May 22, 2007

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    haha idk why
    but this made me laugh.
    i loved it.
    sooooo much.
    i know the feeling of wanting to say something
    but they turned away.
    pshta.
    ILYMUCHOGRANDE!


  • Little Miss Suicide
    May 22, 2007

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    commenting....

    lovely poem yup i like it.......kinda reminds me of someone but ya....


    Megan (mmmmmMegan)