Alone at night
Wanting you
Crying in fright
Needing you
A smile on my face
Loving you
Slipping in grace
Falling for you
Shed broken tears
Without you
Lost in these years
Wishing for you
Can't beat the pain
Caused by you
A broken name
Knowing you
A lost soul
Helping you
Out of control
Wanting you
Author notes
My past; Came to mind. Like it?
Commet?! :]
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LOVE IT!!!
Like it? Love it! This is amazing Trish!!!! I love how it flows!!!
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Yes, sure does have to do with your past.. Cause now you have me
And you shall never be in short supply of me again, okay? I promise =D We shall sing and dance and be married..... Hehe =) Okay? I love you, babe!
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Love it! It's so striking and beautiful and very powerful...keep writing.
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im going to write a "my past came into mind" poem soon too
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i liked this
but try not to give into the past
i'll try
you try.
:/
i agree
this IS pure beauty.
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I love the simplicity. This was really beautiful.
It's been a while since I've seen such pure beauty in poetry before.
Bravo.
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yup
yesh i like it....i like the form alot very snazzy indeed
♥
p.s. i can relate to this alot!!!
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