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Breaking Dimensions

I looked in the mirror this morning and all I could see was the back of my head.

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Hm.

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  • altatok
    September 13, 2007
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    Wow... Beautiful.


  • My Darkness
    June 3, 2007

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    lol.. this makes me laugh.. i don't know why, but i'm sorry if that offends you.. this is very creative! good luck to you in the contest!


  • The Time Keeper
    May 29, 2007
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    It makes me smile.....

  • Mickie27
    May 26, 2007

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    This is a good compression. It's simple and straight forward but it also makes you think if you looked in the mirror how did you see the back of your head? Good I like it.


  • JustinCase
    May 24, 2007

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    Hmmmm I'm beyond confused at this point but I think thats the intent of this poem. If it is good work if not wtf/h?

    Justin


    • electric supernova
      May 24, 2007

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      Haha, it was intentional. I just wonder what a shock it would be to not see the correct side of yourself in a mirror. Thank you for the comment!


  • A Murderous Lament
    May 22, 2007

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    Hmm that is really weird lol kinda creeping me out haha. Good luck in the contest!

    A MURDEROUS LAMENT <\33

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