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All Alone

I feel so all alone
Scared here on my own
My body has been aching
my memories fading
I've been here all alone
since my seed was sewn
All years my thoughts
I'd hold
My heart began to fold
I longed for someone to hold
To lay my head upon a lap
my thoughts we two would zap
You stroke my head
call me sad
To know someone cared
enough to listen
to hear me
as life gets rough
To be held like a child
would help my thoughts
going wild
This I long
This I grieve
Why is it , no one loves me?

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  • Broken Machine
    May 22, 2007
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    Great poem!


  • Leech Lover
    May 22, 2007

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    oh my lord. this is so freaky. This is the secind time someone has tapped into my emotions. I feel just like that. this is an amazing poem i really like it. Good luck in my contest.