Love hides deep behind emerald eyes,
feelings lie concealed in loves cocoon.
Breathing and waiting to be set free,
with the warmth of your kiss upon my lips.
Can't you see the tenderness I offer you,
my heart trembles with the slightest touch.
Dare I tell you how passion burns deep within,
how I yearn inside for your soft hands upon me.
Look deep my love as it cries out for only you.
each breath I breathe longs to give you pleasure.
I can not take back what flows so freely,
my heart is here, desiring to please only you.
Body language speaks sensuality,
my eyes search for a sign of weakness,
Vulnerable to your own hidden desires,
I sense passion will be victorious tonight.
Do not say a word, just delve deep within,
let green eyes veil you in ecstacy.
Lost in my eyes, is where to find paradise,
look deep, it awaits behind emerald eyes.
In a list
A contest entry
- Through Your Eyes. by Poetryintheblood.
350 points, ended May 22, 2007, 8 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Extraordinary! It definitely brought back memories of passion past. "Lost in my eyes, is where to find paradise".....no words need be spoken here on the effect of that! MORE!
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WOW! Sandy, this is such a great poem. It says so much, I don't have the words to say how terrific this poem is. I like all of your poems but this one affected me like no other. Your friend, Jeff
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As usual...Numero Uno..
Eyes search,
Searching for someone,
Someone who completes,
the soul.
Rest in arms,
Close the eyes,
and let go.
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Beautiful Comment
Good morning. You always leave such beautiful words in your comments. They bring a smile on a cloudy day. Thank you so much. I do appreciate it. I hope you have a wonderful day. You take care, Sandy
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Thank you for your entry, Josephine
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lovely
wow sandy you've done it again good luck in contest
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My lovely auntie
wow...a very nice romantic piece here. You're wonderful at writing any kind of poem.
Wish you always the best.
Shahrzad
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Wow ~
My Sweet Friend....
...I don't know if this is anonymous ~
This just about had me sweating bullets!
hehe
A marvelous write with sensual flavors pouring out
of every line to quinch my tastebuds of desire ~
I think this is one of the most....ummm....
....vivid writes I have read in a while ~
Passion....not lust ~
That is what I liked about it the most ~
Very well penned my Dear ~
The best to you in this contest ~
Woo Hoo!
Bear ~
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A Wonderful Comment!!!
Well Bear, you know how much I appreciate your talent. So a wonderful comment from you is such an honor. WOO HOO !!!! I usually don't write free verse but this contest wanted to know what would the one you love see in your eyes. This a very personal poem, thats why I didn't rhyme it. Your comment made me smile, see ------>
It is always a pleasure to hear from you Bear. Hugs and smiles across the miles.
Bless you,
Sandy
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imagery in the final stanza is brilaint, you managed to get a really good metre without rhyming and it sounds all the better for it, this poem , it starts out all lovely, and then it gets sensual, it really shows in your language too, its a great write!
. Rewarded 6
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Great Write!!!
Thank you for the wonderful comment. I so appreciate it. I don't write free verse too often so I am so glad you liked it. You take care, Sandy
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loving
what delights are behind those emerald tears of joy and happiness. Sounds like delightfulness and happy times. Thanks for sharing.
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Lovely Comment
Hi Jules, Thank you again for the nice comments. We all have our dreams. Sadly sometimes they remain but dreams. We don't always get to be with the one in our hearts. Thanks for reading and commenting. You take care, Sandy
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Sad but beautifully tender as well
I hope this is just an empath of an emotion and not something personal sweet lady, very tenderly expressed upon feathered words.
. Rewarded 4
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Nice Comment
Hello, Thank you for reading and leaving a lovely comment. I do appreciate it. I do write from my heart and life most days. You have a wonderful evening. 
Take care, Sandy
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SO LOVELY AND PASSIONATE!
What beautiful feelings in this poem! Your words hold a special kind of love within them.
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Thank You Dear Friend
Kevin, Your comment was lovely my friend. I do put my feelings in my poems as you do. My words are a my life story on a screen. At our age we have so many memories to write about. You take care. Bless you. Lov ya, Sandy
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