Day by day
Night by night
Kiss by kiss
Touch by touch
Step by step
I fall in love
A love so incomprehensible
So vivid
So unique
So wild, that not even the reign of God could control
A passion so deep
A need so necessary
A want so strong
The universe would not handle
I love you today
I’ll love you tomorrow
I’ll love you forever
Author notes
i will be yours if you wish it
A contest entry
- Win my heart and some points ((guys only please)) by Donkaidi.
600 points, ended May 26, 2007, 5 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Jeez!!!
That's written with a passion so great, so strong! You mean we can't get a universe that will bridle your love? Guess not- great write...but, this couldn't have been a man- jk!
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one could wish that love would last that long
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