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I will follow you in the Dark

For people who know me and people who don't
My secrets are in my own darkness
And if you choose
You may learn about them
All I ask is one thing in return:
TRUST

The darkness can hold many things
from monsters and terrors in the night
to the places that cause profound awe and wonder
I can show you these things and much more
My secrets and dreams lay bare at your feet
Be careful where you would tread
Cause you tread on my secrets/dreams...

But don't be afraid
with me as your guide
I can show you the pitfalls and sights
Trust in my guidance if you wish to learn my darkness
For I can show you beauty beyond comprehension
and terrors that crystalize you to your core...

I guess the real question is do you trust me?
A person who is willing to share his secrets/dreams
Seems a little far-fetched...
A person who would let him be vulnerable
But you see... I trust in you
Your ability to have compassion
and help my tortured mind...
Everyone is unique and bring their own views to life...
I am counting on that... Your input is needed...
Are you willing to step into the darkness and embrace it?
The choice is yours...

Peace...
DarkOne



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  • amaranthine lover gold member
    May 22, 2007
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    Well illustrated and it was awesome how you brought the reader into the piece, keep writing!


  • rollingzen
    May 22, 2007
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    'the darkest hour is just before the dawn'


  • maskedromance
    May 22, 2007

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    i really like this... it captured my attention really easily and kept my attention. i really don't know what else to say but good job.