in the middle of nowhere
in the cold mighty Russia
no clothes cover her skin
as no clouds cover the moon
not one sigh, not one word
she is still as the stars
her skin is turning pale blue
and her eyes just see nothing
she doesn't feel cold
she doesn't feel anything at all
for i heard she's waiting for someone
someone that left her in the dark
A contest entry
- Close Your Eyes... by poet2angels.
700 points, ended May 28, 2007, 17 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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This is so touching....brings a tear and with perfect flow...
Very emotional and beautifully written piece!
Lynda
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i felt the same when i wrote this..
you know when you just.. got an idea you cant get over with?
happens to me once in a while, it really hurts me 'till i release it in poetry.
thanks for the comment, and good luck with the contest! -
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I know exactly what you mean. I do the same thing
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