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Defiance

I'll challenge you
One and all
Who wishes to see
This kitten fall?

Can't tie me down
Can't make me yours
Can't tame this fire
This soul that soars

No master can collar
This fiery pet
No one wants a slave
Who's so defiant

I don't take orders
You'll have to ask please
And even then you can't get me
To fall to my knees

Bondage and chains
I'll only enjoy
No one can make me
A helpless toy

Think you can win
Let's see what you've got
Think you can claim me?
Well hun I think not

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hahah bring it on!

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  • slipperssun gold member
    May 22, 2007

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    fantastic write that you have penned... bet that there are some that believe that all can be tamed... i wish you luck in the contest
    cheers
    jen


  • Tconi
    May 22, 2007
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    COOL


  • HeavenScent4U
    May 22, 2007

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    BRAVO MY DEAR BRAVO!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    see i'm so much like you, i'm so defiant that i would make a horrible slave/pet/ even mate possibly. i have attitude, talk back and do what i damn well please

    you did do a wonderful job om this


  • Ktulu Blackwolfe silver member
    May 22, 2007

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    Damn..And they called me SAM...lol Awesome read. Wonder who will be the first to try though

    **Ktulu Blackwolfe**


  • Jadestone Doll
    May 22, 2007

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    I think you are wrong darling. As a Mistress I love them defiant...more fun to pin them down.


  • Tears of Roses
    May 22, 2007

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    HAHAHAH!!!!
    I wonder who will be first to try.
    How many will try.
    Nope not I.
    Wonderful poem
    Roses to you

    Teresa


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    May 22, 2007

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    you go, that is all i can say is that you go, this is something that makes me smile to see, and something that make my blood pump, keep it flowing


    • Vampyric Kitten
      May 22, 2007
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      heheh thanks for the compliment.. I'm just waiting to see what certain other people say about this.. think I'll be put on the block for this one?


  • JaydinC
    May 22, 2007
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    wow...that seems like an interesting task to be at hand....lol sounds fun really.

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