Bob and Weave
Bob and Weave
Like the stealth boxer
working it out alone
in a moonlit corner of the gym
That is what your changing hairstyle makes me think of
One day cropped short (like a boxer’s jabs)
the next, fully extended (for greater impact)
Your hair, your extensions
Sometimes a Bob, sometimes a Weave
Bob and Weave
Bob and Weave
A contest entry
- The Laughs of Society by bloved.
550 points, ended August 2, 2007, 28 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Fun Contest by queen.
300 points, ended July 17, 2007, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Cute! At first I wasn't sure how to take this poem, but then the hair comment, I had to laugh. Cute poem.
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It isn't Shakespeare, but I am pretty sure you didn't mean it to be. It does however work pretty well (not sure about the line breaks for the first three lines of the second stanza) clips along nicely and much the most important, it made me smile!
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Very cool, thank you for entering and good luck in the contest 
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hahahahah wowers very different than expected but I loved it!!!
Bob and Weave....Clever
Thanks for entering
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Hahah.
I love how this is serious but so ridiculously true it's funny.
Nice job <3 -
yarky yark yark.....
i am lafffiingnngn...
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