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You Do This To Me

My world stops spinning, I no longer need to breath, my heart leaps alive again, when you look at me.

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  • My Darkness
    June 3, 2007
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    wow you must be love struck... good write, and good luck to you in the contest!


  • Cherry Hades
    May 24, 2007
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    Hmm..Cute..


  • A Murderous Lament
    May 22, 2007

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    I love this... 100% I think that something else could have described "My heart leaps" better than "waves" but it's really amazing. Great write! Good luck in the contest!

    A MURDEROUS LAMENT <\33