My world stops spinning, I no longer need to breath, my heart leaps alive again, when you look at me.
A contest entry
- Just One Line ---> Give Me Your BEST! by A Murderous Lament.
450 points, ended June 4, 2007, 127 entries
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wow you must be love struck... good write, and good luck to you in the contest!
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Hmm..Cute..
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I love this... 100% I think that something else could have described "My heart leaps" better than "waves" but it's really amazing. Great write! Good luck in the contest!
A MURDEROUS LAMENT <\33
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