The night begins again,
Counting off
beneath the moonlight,
bathed in self-reflection.
A perfection was achieved
as I had left or forgotten a time
when I could eye
and never hold again a loss
of words I've spoken.
Beat by beat
a cleansing
silence was brought about
by the dying of the pen.
A haunting melody
envelopes me
with a thought unto you,
wild and unrelenting.
In a fortune representing me,
a fountain of age and chaos
stood shattering the surface of the water,
showing the truest form of self destruction.
Rapture esteemed by those who gleam
when vested by a power,
Trees that died said to be evergreen.
Storms ensue
and thoughts of you
grew from me, overwhelming,
Leaving you at the helm
of my violent sea of dreams.
Lost, I am no island
and isolation holds the key
to a world I'll never see;
the other side of you.
Author notes
This is part 1, this should be read as the title implies. Enjoy.
A contest entry
- Worthy? by solipsistic.
500 points, ended June 2, 2007, 22 entries
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i personally love this piece. it is amazing! your poetic value is astounding.and i love the fact that you entered itfor me to read. it is just amazing.
best luck and fondest wishes for the contest
~lostelvenchild
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if you feel it is incomplete than take your time and make it feel right to you... i will then come back and comment... i want your best... and so if you can make it better please do so!
so i'll wait and see what you do with this one okay?
~lostelvenchild -
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The only reason I say incomplete is because as it is hand-written, this is only the first half, I am personally satisfied with the presentation value. I'll be glad to present it in expanded form if there is anything you think it might need or can do without. Hope you enjoyed what is written and I hope you find what you're looking for in the contest.
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