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Blank

Everything feels like it's drowning me
Smothering me in nothing
I am a blank
A white sheet of paper submerged in black
Words etched shallowly on the surface
In failed attempts
At covering monotony eternal
In shadows my mind waits
But it will never end
Words fly at me but fall before my guard
None will ever reach me
So why must you try so desperately?
You fling them at me with full force
But they will not touch me
Nothing can when I'm here
Don't try to reach out to me
Just stop
Save it for someone else
They might be deserving of it
As for me, I'm too plain
Just a blank
I'm beyond your help now

Keep trying

And I'll be unable to save you

When you fail

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Just randomness and such.

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  • Jessica Lyndsay
    July 22, 2007

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    I like the randomness and such LOL Very good write!! Keep up the good work and feel free to check out my page anytime!! Jess


  • Luciferschild
    June 14, 2007

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    i like it, it seems cliche at first but the subject is original and very personal, it seems like an angry conversation with someone


  • awannabepoet
    June 14, 2007
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    Darkness is it for others to vanquish

    If words fall to your guard then come forward and pierce my heart for it beats endlessly. Might the enlighted words of those who beseach you find the secret path that your guard conceals.

    That the light vanquishes the dark is no secret as the way to your heart is not through words but with deeds that also is no secret untold.

    I like it, I like it so.