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Unplugged

Sometimes I've come unglued
My motives misconstrued
Activities overextended
Some fences left unmended

Of late I've reconsidered
My life to reconfigure
I need an alibi
Another super try

Apart at the seams It seems
Must alter at any means
I hope it's not too late
My life to resusitate

I just need a change of pace
From blue jeans to silky lace
A whole new elevated place
A rejuvenated face

Wanting to plug back in
A fresh start to begin again
My troubles to rescend
So this won't be my end

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  • PerVirtuous
    May 22, 2007
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    Nice! Works for me! Three bunnies!


    • 2lullabyhaven
      May 23, 2007
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      Thanks PerV

      Still experimenting with the muse. Attempting I don't know what. Having fun though.


  • aliceramone
    May 22, 2007
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    great rhyme and rhythm as you drive the funk out searching for soloutions...well done

    • 2lullabyhaven
      May 23, 2007
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      I like the way you have stated this, this is exactly the way it is...thanks for being the perceptive person that you are-a gift to all.