Sometimes I've come unglued
My motives misconstrued
Activities overextended
Some fences left unmended
Of late I've reconsidered
My life to reconfigure
I need an alibi
Another super try
Apart at the seams It seems
Must alter at any means
I hope it's not too late
My life to resusitate
I just need a change of pace
From blue jeans to silky lace
A whole new elevated place
A rejuvenated face
Wanting to plug back in
A fresh start to begin again
My troubles to rescend
So this won't be my end
A contest entry
- Worthy? by shirk.
500 points, ended June 2, 2007, 22 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Nice! Works for me! Three bunnies!


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Thanks PerV
Still experimenting with the muse. Attempting I don't know what. Having fun though.
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great rhyme and rhythm as you drive the funk out searching for soloutions...well done

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I like the way you have stated this, this is exactly the way it is...thanks for being the perceptive person that you are-a gift to all.
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