simple answers for they ring true and make it clear
my vice is loving you
for all you are
knowing it is frowned apon
knowing it could never happen
your taste is always on my lips
your caress on my cheek
your hair against my shoulder
yes my vice is loving you and giving you the pleasures and desires of your beautiful heart and keeping your love sacred.
this is my vice
it is you.
Author notes
for my sweet addiction
A contest entry
- Your Vice, Personified... by cheaphotelsign.
750 points, ended May 29, 2007, 6 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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A pledge to love someone to in a sense become submissive this is nice Good job
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This poem is breathtaking, its captivating,and truly beautiful . once again,you have touched my heart in places noone else could. You know you've done good when you've brought joy to others. It's just wonderful .Littledove
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Great Flow
This to me is a nice vice. One that a person wouldnt
mind having. Great job.
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Wonderfully written Al
To have somebody that means so much to one is truly astounding and overwhelming at times, but oh, so very worth it all
I wish you and your chosen lady the very best - my heart is filled with fondness of you
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This captivates the hearts and souls of all mankind. This can be taken into the hearts of men and women even ones addiction to something sweet. Well done ...isnt every piece that can relate to all of those aspects. Best of luck in the contest. Dawn
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thanks for the entry! good luck!
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Wow, what an addiction. Must be a very beguiling woman to inspire this. This is a lovely piece. Flawless flow, form, and word choice.
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I am treasure piece I am sure....fills the heart and mind with sacred images....so beautiful...thanks for sharing this with us...smiles, Terry
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That is very powerful!!! A very lucky someone to have a vice capable of all this! Another wonderful write!
Best of luck!!!
Love,
Az
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