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Speed Demon

I'm always right beside you,
There is no place to hide.
And in my pretty fingers,
Is the part of you thats died.

In every single fantasy,
Every single thought.
You see my shining darkness
And eventually begin to rot.

I've been here for a while
And here i am to stay.
Everyone watches you get weak
As i get stronger by the day.

I'll bee with you forever.
Until the day you die.
And was all this bullshit worth it,
Just to catch a high?


to all my family and friends who can't escape......i love you

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  • yellowrose190
    May 28, 2007

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    Well said

    Very well said. My favorite part is:

    You see my shining darkness
    And eventually begin to rot.

    I know what its like to have that addiction. Speed is a terrible thing to get into. Its so hard to escape its grasp. Beautiful poem.

    Susan


  • Twins 4 me
    May 22, 2007
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    What a great write. So full of emotion. great job!

  • poet43
    May 22, 2007
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    Wow -- very powerful

    First one of your's I have read -- it won't be the last. You have the flare for the ending question that just makes me wish the best for your family and friends. I love tag lines like yours, I have used them a lot myself.

    Be the beacon for your family
    Show them just how it can be
    Shine and glow for them to see
    Your heart speaks so sincerely

    poet