Casting pure light upon the shadows so dark,
a friend is there with love to prop you up.
Though a deep pain within you leaves its mark,
a friend is there to offer friendship's cup.
A vessel overflowing from her heart,
drink from that hope which she has reserved for you.
From her words find strength and do not depart,
causing your growth of heart to be made new.
Please do not allow bitterness to scar,
not while her flowing love is never far.
Author notes
Mark Griffin
AP name: markgrif
Hug her for me.
A contest entry
- friendship and rape - dedication to my friend. by petrichor.
700 points, ended June 2, 2007, 16 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Excellent Piece
This is an excellent piece baby. Again I loved the words you used in this. Good luck in the contest you currently have this in.
Keep writing and I will keep reading.
Love Always
Your Ap Girl
Countrybabe
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Very beautiful and powerful! Your heart is as big as the universe....you are really special....smiles, Terry
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Wow this was wonderful. I think you really captured my love for her really well hehe. But on a serious note, it is entirely wonderful. I hope with kind words like that, she will really find the strength to carry on. Thank you so much for this, seriously brightens my day. I also liked your language, every elegant and nice touch of words.
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P.S can I have your ap name as well please!
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