Air trapped in an ethereal shell
Untouched by curious fingers
Smelling stale and plasticky
Only to be moved
When smacked by a paddle
Contents contained
Until broken open
Trapped molecules set free
Author notes
I thought it would be cool to do the ping=pong ball one. No one else did it, and yet everyone knows what's inside-air! (Just like my head right now.) So I thought it would be fun to do this one, since I have had the experience. (There are others, too. They might just be shy.)
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Comments
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This is a subject a certain teacher made us write about if we misbehaved
in my school days.
I never came up with anything as good as this though!
great entry.
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