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The Fact That Your Gone

The fact that you’re gone
Is too much to bear
The pain of my physical being
Aches within me with each passing hour
The tumor in my throat makes it difficult to respond
I write the words of my heart on my very sleeve
So they bleed to the floor
While settling beneath my feet

The wind teases me
With the sound of your voice
As your laughter passes by each tree branch
The chill caresses my body
Just to tease me with the imaginary touch
The sun warms my mind
Which makes me see you before me?
But, I know when I turn around you won't be there

Oh how I missed you so
For all these years
Each passing year I grow less hopeful
To connect to my love
Why does time haunt me so?

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  • whiterabbit.
    May 28, 2007

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    I love this. You are brilliant. This is so sad but the emotions are honest and depicted perfectly. I adore this.
    Why does time haunt me so?
    I wish I knew....
    Wonderful job, you have so much talent.
    your niece ~Stephanie~


  • gothic diva
    May 26, 2007

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    wow i wanted to cry its so sad but ya know its like a pain every one feels in a different way than others may feel its just amazing


  • May 23, 2007

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    I love this piece and it's so powerful. I just love it and it's just wow!


  • kyo kurai kori
    May 22, 2007

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    *crys a river* o me god ... i love it... T_T remind me of when my friend and father died.... *runs away*