For Lauren
Our love, once a thing of beauty and power
Now smothers me into oblivion.
My mind has been clouded, spinning endlessly.
In this sea of manipulation.
Tip-toeing trough my tangled thoughts.
Affection, absent in your presence.
Genuinely happy moments long since lost.
With them my will to supress this.
My only wish was to fall with you,
Into the abyss most people call love.
But with these gripping claws you've bared,
you've torn away my want.
My only wish now is to escape this hell,
Break free from all the shit.
To catch my breath from this never ending,
Suffocating Kiss.
let me know mane...be fully honest.
Comments
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Aww..
This is beautiful.
But so sad.
Oh and I'm called, Lauren ^.^ That's why I was ever so interested in this poem.
I love the lines :
My only wish was to fall with you,
Into the abyss most people call love.
They made me aww outloud. The description in this is amazing. And it put vivid thoughts and images into my head.
Well done!! This is a brilliant poem, I love it.
KetFace - Magic xX
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awwww
THANK YOU SO MUCH YOU FREAKIN RULE
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