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Leaven

I will miss everyone here
Cuz im going to India for the next year
Aculay summer and i dont wanna leave
But im leaven allpoetry for India
Plz dont be mad, plz dont be sad
Ill miss you all a lot
ANd i hope none of u are sad
And i hope u never give up on me cuz ill be back
See you all next school year
See you all and hope i will not miss to much
Leaven u is hard and sad for me but its for schoo
I wanna be a vet and this is my ticket

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  • aeolia
    November 17, 2007

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    Could use some polishing in the sense of poetry and such, but this reads as a letter (and seems intended as one), so I'll let this be. In any case, enjoy India!

    Peace,
    Cristina

  • Liquid memories
    May 27, 2007

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    traveling is great

    what a wonderful field to get into, but sorry you had to go India to learn about Tigers and stuff.Enjoy and hopefully I will be here on your return.


  • ILikeChocolateMilk
    May 22, 2007

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    im kinda sad your going, but have fun in India!! (oh, and i liked the poem as well )