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Hello Mom, it's me your daughter

Hello Mom
thought I would say hello.
I know I don't do it often enough
but I cry after words when I do.

I hope you know I love you
and miss you oh so much.
But your in the arms of the angels
and I know you are happy there.

Even tho I miss her too
I am glad that Gramma is with you.
Tho I feel so much alone
since everyone has left.

But I have the memories
of my family forever in my brain
tho I wish just once
you could hug me and send the tears away.

~Tisha Rene~

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For my Mom who I miss so very much and my Gramma and Grammpa and my other Grammas and Grampas too.  Guess I am next ey?
Written July 31st, 2003

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  • Talia
    July 31, 2003
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    We all want what we can never get back, and the hardest part of it is having to realise that they will never be coming back either. This is a sad write with such heart ache from beginning to end. Well done


  • Desire gold member
    July 31, 2003
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    It will be ok

    The power of the Dream~ Energy so strong with your mom, gramma and papa~ They see what you are doing~ They are watching you and are there for guidance too~ Just ask and see what happens~ I am here for you my friend~ Best bud in the garden. Just down the street~ A hop skip and a jump away~ Call me anytime night or day~ I am here for you~ big hugs~ Desire