I've been taken advantage
Again and Again
but not no more
Not by you or anyone else
I'm free of your hold
And freed of your curse
the part of you...
I use to hold so dearly
Is the part that now...
meanings absolutely nothing to me
Never Again will you make me cry
And never again will...
I fall victim to your lies
A contest entry
- love= Heartbreak by Hearts.That.Bleed.
375 points, ended July 1, 2007, 14 entries
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Comments
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Great voice
this poem speaks out not just to you but to all the women each day who must go through with being taken advantage of and being made to feel like second class citizens. I'm glad that your one of the few who has taken a stand for what's best for you. Great write and goodluck in my contest.


