Bloodshed over Emotions
Murders over Thoughts
Isolations by Many
Endless wars Fought
Houses of our Lord Marred
By the marred free will given to Man
Decimation of populations, and for What!
Lies! over what lyes beneath the Sand
While Pharmaceuticals, are only farmed for the Suitable
Affordable for those pockets, that are well Endowed
And for those that are broke, It's just a fucking Joke
They say sorry, we just don't have quality care for the impoverished right Now
As selfish judgments are executed, only for material Gains
Our natural resources extinguished, for the same selfish Reasons
As we've replaced face to face, for personal disconnections in Cyberspace
Virtual realities now control the path forward, for the entire Human Race
Global Warming and Global Warnings
2 minute resolutions followed by 2 minute Warnings
Battle stations with 2 Minute Drills
1 push button and 1 Million instantaneous Kills!
Government for the People
Governed by Our Rules
Now it's only Governed People
Where Government has "No Rules"
Our "Living Insanity"
Has become the world we let Live
As our "Living In Sanity" slips Away
Like flowing water through a Sieve
So how can we truly come Out
From being Insane
When the 1st rule of Insanity
Is not recognizing thee Insane
Maybe one realization, Is that our Civilization!
Has truly missed, what we were intended and meant to Be
And since the future's recording, is but a past track Record
Would it not be Insane to say we're.... ~Living In Sanity~
Get The Point
Are we Living "In Sanity" or Living "Insanity" or...
Are we the true Personnification of..."Living Insanity"
What A Contradiction of Terms or...
Is There Just No Difference At All!
Peace
Holla @ Ja Boi
TX Leonard
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Wow i really like the harsh reality you portrayed in this poem. Very nice and very accurate. I particully liked the first paragraph.
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Very nice. I am glad I found you here on AP. Well first off I applaud you speaking up about what you see in the world. Most don't and it drives me, and quite frankly them, crazy! Love the poem, a few thoughts.
--"While Pharmaceuticals, Are only farmed for the Suitable" yes and the real joke here is that what we call the medical treatment in this place is preposterous to begin with. Always treating symptoms not causes, and thats only the beginning. Don't get me started on vaccines.
--"Government for the People
Governed by Our Rules
Now it's only Governed People
Where Government has "No Rules""
This is so true and so important to look at. We, if you look into it, live in at the very least a aristocracy. Light years from anything close to true democracy. But really its just pure fascism, disguised. Most have no clue. There laughing behind our backs. Its disgusting. We need to take ourselves back to take them down. It has to be done, there is no other option for us, for our children.
This turned into a rant. Thanks for the inspiring poem!
Vote Ron Paul, not like it matters, they control that too, that is if we dont already fall in line like good little sheepole.
With
Creatress
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What A Contradiction of Terms or...
Is There Just No Difference At All!
I really find an amazing poetry here my friend because of its erange and the wastness of the concept ..This is just wonderful revealing the life and its touches in the poetic words here..I love its depth and its truth of the concept my friend..the sceanrio of the muse here revels the secrets of the life in every line here in this write..The pace and the structure of the write takes us towards the world of its hidden meaning and that is just wonderful my friend... -
You have an interesting style of writing and you give some powerful messages. Very good.
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Awesomeee!!
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♥--T.R;
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Wow
This poem is really amazing!
"Bloodshed over Emotions
Murders over Toughts"
"Are we Living "In Sanity" or Living "Insanity" or...
Are we the true Personnification of..."Living Insanity""
I really, really loved it! -
I love this poem, im trying to wonder how long did you take you to write....I LOVE THIS POEM
the first stanza
Bloodshed over Emotions
Murders over Thoughts
Isolations by Many
Endless wars Fought
_Oh I love this poem already...
Global Warming and Global Warnings
2 minute resolutions followed by 2 minute Warnings
Battle stations with 2 Minute Drills
1 push button and 10,000 instantaneous Kills!
that stanza is also my favorite
oh and this (So how can we truly come Out
From being Insane
When the 1st rule of Insanity
Is not recognizing thee Insane)
Verse is so profoundly stated it makes complete sence -
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Thank you very much for your excellent feedback and taking the time to read and appreciate my writes. To be completely honest they seem to just pour out. This one took 15 minutes. Each stanza just flowed out of me and onto the paper as you see before you. I try not to think about what to write I just let the writes come out of me.
Most of my poems take between 10 mintues to the longest being Angola Empty houses to an Hour. I truly appreciate your comment back to me thank you very much
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hmmmm....Interesting
Very interesting allthough very different peice. i like it alot. the rhyme scheme aslthough choppy at times still flows very eloquently and rolls off the toungue. the stanza mentioned below holds a personal meaning to me, i am in a high state of agreement on this particular veiw or beleif. it is a government run by us but not for us, and those not graced with deep pockets and even deeper families dont have the help needed in this country to continue living their lives andin so doing their choice to live is taken from them because of lack of resources. but any way im on a rant and ill drop it, nice peice man, good job. Peace out Anguish
While Pharmaceuticals, Are only farmed for the Suitable
Affordable for those pockets that are well Endowed
And for those that are broke, It's just a fucking Joke
They say sorry we don't have quality care for the impoverished right Now
. Rewarded 8
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