this world...full of illusions....AND pretentiousness
trust is something that has been lost...
fake people, fake thoughts
fake all their challenges
amidst all my agonies
i stand by and watch
as they slice out compassion..no matter how endangered it already was
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- Seven Lines by Lj-.
300 points, ended May 27, 2007, 26 entries
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I enjoyed this piece. A lot on falsities.
The last line:
"endagered" possibly "endangered"
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Oh words of such truth my dear. Wonderfully penned. Your last line is amazing!
All the best to you
Gaylene
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