i'm simply leaving everything
open for
you.
systematic failure
of the senses,
tonight
i am unaware.
you, delicious fiend,
may tempt me in this state,
as my blind eyes and chapped
lips need care.
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a love poem i wrote in my sleep.
leave your baggage at the door,
this is my intoxicated knowledge.
Please tell me what you think
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Creative title and vivid images these lines leave with us - liked the use of space, the variance in line length and the flow.
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WOW I liked that one alot lots of openness.NICE!!!
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Impressive....
This tells a little story....I liked it!!
It sort of has a reminiscing feel...
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thank you.
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