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Mill Worker

It's already five
and I'm up again, to work.
Try not to starve today
before I dip my head in the sink
to wash my hair
before the water runs dry.

I've got three kinds of shirts

almost respectable
dirty
and acrid smelling.

and today I have dirty.

I guess I'm lucky
that I don't have to wreak
like a dump
but only look like one;
I'm the luckiest man
on this side of town.

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